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Clench my soul, go right ahead; ignite your flesh and I shall deem you dead.

Dance with fire and thou shalt be burned, scorched to deformity with your soul never returned.

Exceed your limits, turn away your falls, shall the trials begin beneath the walls?

Oh yes, they shall, my dearest thing, for your fate will rest within this ebony ring.

Such glory was enthralled into my soul, how you plead for its power, its superiority, its toll.

Though alas you've proven not worthy of it all, hence your death shall be remarkable, forever now you shall fall.
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SciroccoStorm Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
wow!
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vasudhamaiya Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
great! :)
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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:iconvasudhamaiya:
vasudhamaiya Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
i had a particular incident that i could relate your poem with and thus i came up with that description. was your idea behind the poem a similar one ? or something different?
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your painting clearly states my intentions in writing the poem; there are a few other details, but nonetheless you did a wonderful job. ^_^
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vasudhamaiya Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
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this link will give the painting. hope you like it. :)
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's truly a beautiful painting~~ ^_^
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:iconvasudhamaiya:
vasudhamaiya Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
Hey! loved your work! it has very strong emotions! i have done a painting of your poem... i would be happy to show it to you. :)
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:) I'm glad you enjoyed it; I would love to see your painting~
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Astro-Creep166 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like thinking of people I hate when I read this
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Understandable. ^_^
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SilverScreams999 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
LOVE IT!
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you do. ^_^
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SilverScreams999 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
~smile~ thank you for the llama
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. ^_^
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Cygam-7 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013   Traditional Artist
Very powerful wording and imagery :)
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. ^_^
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CoolWhip48 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
I'm reading this in the dark and I could suddenly feel this nauseous feeling in the pit of my stomach; it's very unsettling and it really sucks you in and makes you feel like you're being punished and that you're time has run out.

In other words, this is right up my alley as far as style and content. This was extremely well-written. A+, my friend! :)
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, thank you so very much. ^_^
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breezeblocks Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
I really like this ^-^
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you do. ^_^
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like fire too! ^-^
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I most certainly thought so. ^_^
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:la:
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InTheSpot Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Bravo!
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. ^.^
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:iconsage6pathz:
Sage6pathz Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It has a nice flow, not my style, but overall it's nice.
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ Thank you.
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camellia01 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow.... thats all i can say... :iconbravoplz:
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ Thank you.
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camellia01 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mp ^.^ and thanks for the llama
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RoguetheScarredAngel Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Writer
I simply love this <3
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ I'm quite glad you do.
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RoguetheScarredAngel Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Writer
and thank you for the badge and watch!! :D

Yea, your poems are amazin :)
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ You're welcome, and thank you.
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RoguetheScarredAngel Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Writer
:) ^_^
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Dickywebster Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Ooo, pyrotechnics, this is a first that I've seen :)
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:iconplethorafantastique:
PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ Indeed.
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Dickywebster Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Always nice too see a writer experimenting ^^
Especially when they make it look easy ;)
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