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The jar of tears has fallen to pieces, lost are the memories from within the creases.

They've all abandoned me, my silent friends, our bonds have withered beyond their ends.

So predictable this scene truly was, the girl who fell from not a single cause.

Twas my own fault, for I banished all help, rotted to pieces within myself.

Though alas a mark has been etched within stones, "My soul lives forever without my bones."
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poeknowsprose Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
This is sad, but it has a great flow. I really enjoyed it. You are really good at rhyming as well as making your lines flow extremely well. I especially liked the last line.Well done!
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. ^_^
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tatiana3222 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm here for you, should you ever wish to have someone to speak to. :)

On another note, lovely poem.
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you Tatiana, as I am here for you. :)

Thank you. ^_^
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Cygam-7 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013   Traditional Artist
Magnifique :)
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. ^_^
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InTheSpot Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
My friends abandoned me...But still, it's a nice poem!
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A few old friends of mine abandoned me as well; thank you. ^_^
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InTheSpot Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Your welcome!
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Mononoke-Hime-15 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
Wow. This is amazing!
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