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Beneath twisted vines of exceptional lies, exists a simplistic immortal who dares not speak.

Her covered eyes release an echo, one that frightens and silences the weak.

And why dost thou hide from her in the clouds, is it to bypass her howls and shrieks?

Is your fear that condensed, must you avoid her being, or are you simply one of the weak?

It does not matter, not anymore, for her immortality is dominance; thou art no more.
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ReizYouUp Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
I like the phrases in this one, especially the first two lines. It evokes fear in me. Nice.
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. ^_^
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ReizYouUp Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
Thank you for the nice art.
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Kerriaa1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Truly stunning ^.^
Those words are sheer perfection.
Simply delightful, your eloquence is truly remarkable.
Well done ^.^
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. ^_^
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Asrath Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, it's so striking... such a simple and complicated poem at the same time... and so beautifully written! Awesome!
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^.^ Thank you very much.
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Hayabusaoffaith Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't get it entirely... but it is quite beautiful.
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. ^_^
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Hayabusaoffaith Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!! :)
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IceVenom Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow this is just lovely!
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. ^_^
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nicely written, she seems to be quite a monstrous woman.
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ Indeed, thank you~
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RoguetheScarredAngel Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Writer
I love this.... :)
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm happy you do. ^_^
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RoguetheScarredAngel Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student Writer
:)
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Shadowsbeloved Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Photographer
This is just fantastic!!! Lovely, complex and attention grabbing :) Thanks for posting!
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much, and you're welcome. ^_^
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Shadowsbeloved Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Photographer
You're quite welcome, madam :meow:
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Cygam-7 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013   Traditional Artist
I adore this piece! Wonderfully worded :D
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Thank you very much. ^_^
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InTheSpot Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Whoa...I have this roleplay character, and it's a goddess, and this poem relates to her so much...freaky...
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PlethoraFantastique Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^.^ How very interesting..
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InTheSpot Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Yep!
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